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    Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

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    Ell

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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Ell on Wed Jun 09, 2010 6:20 pm

    Guys, guys, guys, ill fix it. It really isn't a big deal, seriously. I was planning on changing some things up anyway.
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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Ell on Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:13 pm

    Kago wrote:I'd like to see A LOT more in your History, you are a Jounin.

    I'd also liek it if you made more of an effort describing your Clothing. You barely say anything about it.

    I'm unsure on the 3 Ice Jutsu, and would like the judgement of another mod but here is my view.


    Ice jutsu: Touketsu Chi [Frozen Blood] <--- I don't really like that your just freezing the body part and thast its, its then useless, maybe make it so the jutsu slightly freezes the blood, making it painful to move the joint. having it almost instantly disable teh use of a limb is way too powerful and would easily by S Rank.

    Ice jutsu: AisuShikon <--- How big is this piece of ice on the floor. edit it into the Jutsu.



    Ice jutsu: Touketsu Shuriken [frozen shuriken] <--- Freezing wounds doesn't cause serious pain, it causes some pain, but not enough to effect their judgement, this would be like being struck with a normal Shuriken but with teh added effect of slightly freezing teh flesh, causing a little more pain.


    All 3 Ice Jutsu <--- Add they can be easily melted with Katon jutsu.

    Once these changes are made, you look good to go.

    Ell is awesome.
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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Teashi on Thu Jun 10, 2010 7:58 pm

    I am a bit bad at judging myself, but this is what I came up with : 3

    Ice jutsu: Touketsu Chi
    Rank: A or B

    Ice jutsu: Aisu Shikon
    Rank: B or C

    Ice jutsu: Touketsu Shuriken
    Rank: C or D

    Ice Jutsu: Kame Mamori
    Rank: C

    Ice Jutsu: Kame Zaika
    Rank: C

    Ice Jutsu: Sousou Fuyu
    Rank: B or C

    Ice Jutsu: Shakuhou SonoYajin
    Rank: A or B

    Water/Blood Jutsu: Ketsueki Enmu
    Rank: B or C

    As for your other jutsu, they are canon jutsu right? Look up their ranks on Naruto.wikia.com ^^


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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Kaiden on Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:24 am

    Approved
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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Teashi on Sun Jun 13, 2010 5:46 pm

    Un-approved for editing purposes. Will need official re-approval when done!


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    Re: Konoha jounin (sensei) Touketsuhi, Ell

    Post  Kaiden on Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:56 pm

    reapproved

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