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    Jounin: Mabu Uremu

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    Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Bingofuel on Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:45 pm

    Character Name: Mabu Uremu

    Elements: Wind

    Character Age: 24
    Gender: Male
    Village: Sand
    Appearance
    Height - 179cm
    Weight - 62 kg
    Hair - Brown
    Eyes - Black.
    Body Build – Normal, Not to muscled.. mostly takes advantage of his speed.
    Clothing: Uiremu wears a Grey pullover with a white shirt. His pants is blue in color (Simple clothing). On his feet he wears the traditional shinobi sandals when he goes on a mission, otherwise he walks on his bare feet.

    Looks:

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    Background Story:
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    Mabu is the oldest son in his family. He became a ninja when he saw his uncle, Kazaki Uremu being attacked by Rogue Ninjas. Kazaki survived and the rogue ninjas fled away from him. He beated them without getting a scratch. Mabu knew from that day on that he would become a ninja. Mabu graduated at the academy at the age of 11 and became a Chuunin at 14. At this young age he was seen as a jolly young man who always laughed and had fun with his friends even when they had to do missions. He became a Jounin at the age of 17. He was chosen as Team leader for Team Bingo by the old village leader. Team Bingo existed out of 4 members: Mato, Tsaiku, Arashi and Mabu himself. They became closest friends and when you saw one from the four, you’d probably see the other three too. Mabu’s reputation grew. Quickly he became known throughout the country as a fierce ninja who had talent and was determined to become an even better ninja in order to protect his village.
    But than the day came when he left the village and set out. He planned to explore the other countries. He said farewell to his friends and family and promised he would return as an even better ninja. He packed his backpack,took some ninja tools, some money and some food and left the village. On his journey he did many little jobs like helping to repair a bridge or transport something in order to gain some money to buy food, water and ninja tools (kunais, shurikens, blades, etc..). He also tamed 2 mountain wolves, who lived inside the mountains in his country. Nowadays he uses these 2 wolves as his summons. *Watch till my friends and family see this* Mabu thought. * Hehe wolves, I guess nobody in the village has these cool summons.* He wandered through a lot of Ninja countries and made a lot of friends, did alot of tasks and witnessed alot of breath-taking adventures.
    After two years, he stopped at the Yerai village where he met his girlfriend, later she became his wife. At that time the rumor spread about the old village leader being very ill. That reminded Mabu about his old hometown. He decided to return with all his new techniques he learned on his journey. But by the time he arrived at the village the Old village leader was already dead. He showed his new jutsus and his summon to his friends and his family. They admitted it, Mabu had become really strong. 4 Months later Mabu became jounin.
    His wife Taisho, which he brought from the yerai village, also lives in the village now. She can cook real good, especially pork ramen. His younger brother Kotaki aims to become even stronger than him and they have made a pact, when Kotaki becomes Jounin Mabu will let Kotaki use his unique summon too.



    Personality:
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    He is a very social/friendly/peaceful man, he likes to make new friends. He is a very reliable person and also loves to socialize with the villagers, he always says goodday or something like that to everyone except for his enemys. He likes to organize festivals and events in his village. Mabu likes to take the the initiative in battle. He is also very friendly towards the other countries. He is a little bit lazy and doesn't do his jounin work often. He likes to train with his ninja team and likes to treat them by buying some good food and drinks on the missions. He is a real Hedonist.

    Weaponry:
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    Doesn’t has a lot of weapons with him, 10 kunais and 10 shurikens, 10 explosive tags and a couple of smoke bombs. He uses the Generic Sealing Technique to summon his big weapons in battle. This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice.

    Combat
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    Kekkei Genkai: Iron sand
    The people who possess this bloodline have the ability to use magnetism to control and manipulate Iron Sand. The Iron Sand can then be turned from solid, back to its original state to be used for another attack.The Iron Sand has the same possibilities of use as sand itself (like gaara).
    Ninjutsu: Fuuton and daton based jutsu.
    Genjutsu: He is quite decent at genjutsu although he likes to make his own variations like beer illusion jutsu which he developed at a young age, he used it to prank his friends and teachers.
    Taijutsu:Doesn’t have any special taijutsu tricks up his sleeve like Gai sensei and Rock lee.
    Kenjutsu: Pretty decent, he summons his weapons or uses the iron sand to create some.

    Summon:

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    Name: Zetska and Ketsu(2 Wolves)
    Owner's Name: Mabu Uremu
    Gender: Male & Female
    Height: Around 1m
    Weight: 40 kg
    Description: They are 2 wolves who live in the mountains from the land of earth.
    Mabu uss these 2 wolves for tracking the enemy.

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    Rank: B-rank
    Weapons: The wolves use their claws to scratch and their teeth to bite the enemy.


    Scratch
    The technique is used when the wolves are threatened or it can also be used as an attack. Its a melee attack.

    Bite
    Bite is also a melee attack. It can be used to stun the enemy when they bite the prey in the neck, without releasing the grib.




    Jutsu:

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    Kai – Release
    Art: Genjutsu
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
    *Note: Success of the Release depends on Genjutsu skill and judge discretion. Must be close in Genjutsu stat to opponent.
    Limit: None

    * Kaiten Gakuri [Wind/Kekkei genkai ] (NOT APPROVED)
    A-Ranked Ninjutsu
    By concentrating Iron sand in his hand mixed with the wind chakra that causes rotation, the user can do a melee attack like rasengan.The lttle particles of Iron sand that move really fast can cut trough flesh. Mabu created this jutsu himself.

    Doton/Kekkei genkao • Iron Sandstorm [Wind/Kekkei Genkai ]
    B-Ranked Ninjutsu
    By sending Iron sand in the air (with his wind element) he can create an Iron sandstorm that blinds the enemy. This jutsu is a defensive jutsu. Most of the time it is used to retreat from the battle.

    Satetsu Ganchūsō (Kekkei Genkai: Iron Sand Pillars Rising)
    C-C-ranked jutsu
    This technique lets the user create a few pillars amde of Ironsand that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The Iron sand pillars will pass through an obstacle, like a house, to reach their target.

    Genjutsu: Dizziness Illusion
    B-ranked Genjutsu
    Genjutsu techniques that manipulate the flow of chakra in the victim's brain, thus causing a disruption in their senses. The enemy starts feeling dizzy, it effects the enemy’s stability. Mabu created it when he was a teenager, he used to call it the get-wasted-fast-jutsu because it has the same effect like when you drink to much and start feeling dizzy.

    Generic: Sealing Technique
    This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice.


    Iron Sand World Order- Iron sand: Kekkei Genkai
    S-ranked Offensive Jutsu
    This jutsu uses Iron Sand to create a gigantic sphere of branching spikes. The user creates two masses of Iron Sand with opposite polarities and then merges them together. This causes the magnetic forces to instantly increase and the repellent force created by the two opposing magnetic fields scatters the Iron Sand across a vast area.
    The Iron Sand spreads in spikes that branch off irregularly, making it almost impossible to get a clear overview of what is happening. Even if the opponent has managed to evade getting hit (chance is very low), the Iron Sand spikes will have filled the entire surroundings, cutting off any escape routes.

    Iron Sand Drizzle – Satetsu Shigure Iron sand: Kekkei Genkai
    A-ranked Ninjutsu
    This gunshot-like attack uses Iron Sand, hardened into microscopic grains, to attack simultaneously across a vast range. The bullets are so fast, they're difficult to see. Using the repellent force of magnetism, the speed of the bullets is rapidly increased after they are shot. Furthermore, the user can also use an attack pattern where the Iron Sand bullets are shaped into sharp needles, increasing their ability to wound or kill the enemy.

    Iron Sand Gathering – Iron sand: Kekkei Genkai
    A-ranked Ninjutsu
    This technique gathers a great volume of Iron Sand and compresses it into a high-density shape. This greatly increases the hardness, creating a gigantic steel-like weapon in an instant. Because the weapon is made out of Iron Sand, the shape can be whatever the user wants, and can even be changed during the fight. This allows the user to create the best weapon for the fight, by taking into account the opponent's abilities and the surrounding environment. Examples: a Giant Spear or Giant Hammer.

    *Ninpou • Hari Jizou [Ninja Arts • Underworld Guardian Spikes]
    B-Ranked Ninjutsu
    Ninpou - Hari Jizou is a Ninjutsu technique used by Mabu. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's hair will grow in length to surround and protect his body. In this form it also becomes ridged and spiked, forming a layer of protection from direct strikes and blows.

    Summoning Technique: Kuchiyose no Jutsu
    C-rank
    This jutsu allows Mabu to summon his own 2 wolves to perform special tasks.
    When the animal is summoned it is transported from its place of residence to the summoner's
    location. Once summoned, the animal can perform a task or help the user in battle.

    Futon Sho Fujin - Wind Release: Typhoon of the wind gods Technique
    B-rank ninjutsu
    Mabu creates a typhoon that hits the enemy. He can control the typhoon and chase
    the enemy with it. The shape and size can be manipulated, when Mabu puts
    more chakra in the jutsu the typhoon becomes larger and has more destructable power but
    it gets harder to control it when enlarging it.

    Futon Kujaku Mato - Wind release: suffocating wind
    B-rank ninjutsu
    Mabu blows away the air molecules with his wind technique to "suffocate" the enemy. In
    fact it doesn't suffocate the enemy, it just causes breathing problems. And will drain your
    fatigue.

    Futon: Kami Oroshi - Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains
    C-rank ninjutsu
    This technique creates a vortex of wind to blast at a target.


    Iron sand shell - Kekkei Genkai
    B-ranked jutsu
    This jutsu creates a shereical shield around the ninja. It protects the ninja from outside threats. Its a defensive jutsu.

    Rough iron winds (kekkei Genkai)
    A-ranked
    A large wave of small senbon shaped iron projectiles made from th iron sand are fired forward,
    but when an enemy blocks them with a metal weapon Mabu will have control over that object
    because of their magnetic properties.
    This will give the object a magnetised status for a temporary amount of time.


    Satetsu Doriru (Iron Sane Drill)
    B-ranked
    Requirements: Iron Sand Bloodline
    Description: With enough knowledge in fighting, if for some reason their attacks can't hit due to being overpowered, this option was presented.
    It allows for drill like marks to be made onto an object,
    or just having an object spin at a high speed and force its way through defenses
    and other attacks.

    Iron sand Clone Technique - Satetsu Bunshin no Jutsu (Kekkei Genkai)
    C-rank
    The Iron sand Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of iron sand. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body.

    Body Replacement Technique - Kawarimi no Jutsu
    E-rank
    This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Basically all ninja know this technique.

    Transformation Technique - Henge no Jutsu
    E-rank
    This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konohagakure Ninja Academy, and most shinobi know this jutsu. The transformation technique is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on an inexperienced ninja.





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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kisai on Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:23 pm

    I like the way you mixed electric eels and iron sand jutsu... Could make some nice combos in the future but don't eels need water to live?

    Also PM me if you want a better char pic... no offense but yours is well... ok but not sexy...


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Akane on Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:44 pm

    Im not approving this.

    Eels within the earth? not acceptable. They are water creatures. Plus trying to get kirin out of it wont happen.
    You are iron sand yet you are using normal sand jutsu? Not happening either.

    I however do not mind your personality since i understand its not the easiest thing to describe.
    Getting a better picture may be appropriate but if you want to keep that one you will need to be more descriptive of his appearance.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Hatsu on Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:23 pm

    Change the eels into snakes, that will make more sense. And relax, you wont be similar to Orochimaru! Razz
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Bingofuel on Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:36 pm

    Okay Thanks for the suggestions and help..
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Bingofuel on Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:55 pm

    -Edited Look above-


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Alucard on Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:41 pm

    I approve of this simply for the lulz & for being a wall of text.
    If I get banned, I blame you William.
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kenji on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:36 am

    I'm Not approving this because in my opinion the Story is only Jounin standard. Maybe not even that. And also your Jutsu * Kaiten Gakuri [Wind/Kekkei genkai ] <- Like rasengan ? You also never included how you learned this in the story, Since there were never any other Kage's or naruto Rasengan doesn't exist. So i'd say sort these out and expand your story.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Bingofuel on Tue Jun 15, 2010 9:57 am

    1. Akane needs to approve it...
    2. It isn't a rasengan... Its just a melee jutsu where Mabu uses his wind element fused with his iron sand element where he creates some sort of ball made of flying particles in his hand.. And I already know Im the first tsuchikage Suspect
    3. And yes my story needs to be expanded a bit..
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kenji on Tue Jun 15, 2010 10:28 am

    Kage's can approve too if i am not mistaken. And what i meant about the jutsu is that you never included in the story how you learned it and if you have a new jutsu that you made up you must post it in the Jutsu thread.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kaiden on Tue Jun 15, 2010 5:28 pm

    Actually we're not using the jutsu thread yet. We're just approving made up jutsu on the applications for now in order to expediate the process.
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Ell on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:30 pm

    Noooot hokage material. add more, clean up your grammar, ect.
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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kenji on Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:11 pm

    Even though your opinion counts Ell you can't really say whether it isn't or is Kage material.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Teashi on Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:16 pm

    Sure he can, he can't approve it, but he can give tips and pointers, etc.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kenji on Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:52 pm

    Well that's what i meant.


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Bingofuel on Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:05 am

    Well Im going on vacation for 2weeks!! So I won't be online and can't RP..
    -Bingo out-
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    Post  Kago on Mon Jun 28, 2010 4:55 pm

    You changed to Jounin?

    No longer Tsuchikage?


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    Re: Jounin: Mabu Uremu

    Post  Kisai on Mon Jun 28, 2010 5:03 pm

    He said its to difficult...


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