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    Ajima Hanuko

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    Ajima Hanuko

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    Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Ajima Hanuko on Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:18 pm

    Name►
    Ajima Hanuko

    Info
    Spoiler:
    Gender►
    Male
    Age►
    22
    Personality►
    He is a lazy but short-tempered Genius! He accidentally Strips when talking about important buisness whether it may be to a stranger or a Good friend.
    He Also pukes when he see's Bearded ladys... ( Circus o.o )
    Appearance►
    [spoiler][/spolier]
    Shinobi Info
    Spoiler:

    Village►
    Kirigakure
    Rank►
    Chunin
    Chakra Affinity►
    Suiton
    Secondary Affinity►
    Fuuton
    Inventory►
    Bottle of water. (Needs to stay hydrated Wink)
    Wire.
    (Ajima doesn't really need weapons as he can just make them from ice on the spot).
    Weapon►
    Ice Weapons.
    Favourite- Katana.

    Fighting style►
    Mix between Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. (Ice Taijutsu combo).
    Jutsus
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    Ninjutsu
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    Hyouton Kazuki - Ice Mould
    Art: Ninjutsu
    Rank: E-A
    Type: Suplementary
    Range: Self
    Description: Hyouton • Hyouton Kazuki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. The user will create any shape he wants from pure ice. He can make shuriken, kunai, keys or even statues. At higher levels even houses.
    Limit: Hyouton Element.


    Koorigan Ice Eye
    Members of the Aisu clan have this Doujutsu activated at Genin, it allowes the user to see the moisture in the air, therefore predict how much ice they can produce, as to form Ice they must use the moisture in the air. The Koorigan is always active, leaving the members of the Aisu clan with their notorious icy blue iris, the Koorigan will make the user see everything in a shade of blue, the light the shade of blue the less moisture in the air, therefore the darker the more moisture, the blue tint in their vision doesn’t fully impair their vision, it would be the same as looking through blue tinted glasses.
    Clan Jutsu:
    ~Aisu [Ice]
    E-Rank Ninjutsu
    Aisu is simply the creation of ice. At this stage the user would simply mold a small quantity of ice at a particular part of his body, normally on his hands, using the ice at them to safely grab a kunai or such.

    ~Hyouketsu [Freeze]
    D-Rank Ninjutsu
    Hyouketsu is a technique which simply requires the user to touch a nearby water source, using his special chakra to freeze it. The chakra needed depends of the size of the water source. In some cases it could also be used to make the air colder, partially transforming the water moisture into ice, or even, while in mid air, create an ice block, which the user could use to jump higher, or change direction while in mid air.

    ~Yuki no Mari (Snow Ball Jutsu)
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu

    By collecting water in the Aisu user's hand, he is allowed to form a snow ball. By focusing chakra into the ball, whenever it is thrown at the enemy it explodes with the force of 1/2 an exploding tag.

    ~Itteiondo no Jutsu [Euthermia Technique]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    After a number of years of using their bloodline, the Aisu developed a method to keep their bodily temperature at the regular temperature for a human (98.2 °F ±1.3 °F) despite the temperature of the environment. This allows them to use their Hyouton jutsu without them having any detrimental effects on themselves.

    ~Hyoumu no Jutsu [Ice Prison]
    C-Rank Ninjutsu
    Hyourou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Aisu clan member. After forming the needed handseals, the user will touch the ground, causing columns of ice to rise from the ground at her foe. If caught, the ice will rise up around her target and imprison them. He/She can also use this technique as a defensive measure, raising the ice to form a shield against incoming attacks.

    ~Sensatsu Suishou [Death by a Thousand Flying Water Needles]
    C-Rank Ninjutsu
    Sensatsu Suishou is a Ninjutsu technique unique to the Aisu bloodline. To create the needles, the user forms the needed hand seal and then kicks water into the air with his foot. The water then rises into the air and takes the form of a thousand needles. These needles then come raining down on his target.

    ~Hyouton • Haryuu Mouko [Destruction Dragon Fierce Tiger]
    C-Rank Jutsu
    Hyouton • Haryuu Mouko is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, an ice tiger will rise from the surrounding ice to strike out against its target. Its cold nature can freeze most nearby water, and its large mass can cause a large amount of damage when it impacts.

    ~Toukan [Ice Cold]
    B-Rank Ninjutsu
    Prerequisite: Aisu [Ice]
    Toukan is a Ninjutsu technique in which the user would create a semi-dense layer of ice all around his body, creating an excellent defense, especially against weaker projectiles (kunai, shuriken, etc), and nearly doubles the power of their physical strikes. However, if the clan member isn’t strong enough, they will be slowed significantly by the weight of the ice.

    ~Rouga Nadare no Jutsu [Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique]
    B-Rank Jutsu
    Hyouton • Rouga Nadare is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, an avalanche of snow will rain down towards the clan members opponent. As the snow slides down, it will coalesce into large snow wolves. These wolves can follow the clan member's bidding and attack his opponent. A sufficiently powerful straight thrust can disrupt the wolves and return them to snow.

    ~Aisu no Hari (Ice Needle Jutsu)
    B-Ranked Ninjutsu
    The jutsu starts doing a handseal before focusing on the air around his palm, the user can quick freeze any water in the air around him to use in the jutsu. He focuses all the water in the air to a certain point and releases a barrage of water towards the opponent. Upon contact each needle causes a small explosion. This jutsu is able to be used in quick succession up to three times in a row.

    ~Ginban (Ice Skating Rink Jutsu)
    B-Ranked Ninjutsu
    Prerequisite: Hyouketsu [Freeze]
    The user in Aisu clan starts by performing handseals and putting his/her hands on the ground. The water on the ground (put on there by some force of nature or jutsu means) is transformed into ice, creating a rudimentary "skating rink". The maximum limit to length is a twenty yard radius surrounding the user.

    ~Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu - Black Dragon Blizzard
    B-Ranked Ninjutsu
    Hyouton • Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, the clan member will thrust his arm to send out an ice dragon to strike his opponent. As it flies through the air it will begin to turn, when it hits the target it will use its motion to launch the opponent high into the air, dissipating after it makes contact with either the opponent or the ground.

    ~Makyou Hyoushou [Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors]
    B-Rank Ninjutsu
    Makyou Hyoushou is a Ninjutsu technique unique to the Aisu bloodline. After forming the necessary hand seals, nearby water forms long flat mirrors 360 degrees around the target. The user then places himself inside one of the mirrors. Once inside the mirror, the user can then using the mirror reflections to confuse his target. Utilizing the reflections, the user can then almost instantaneously move from one mirror to the other. Due to the speed, his target will appear to be moving in slow motion. Because of this he can then unleash numerous needles into his opponent with little difficulty. Using this technique for long periods of time however, will quickly use up the user chakra.

    ~Itsukaku Hakuegei [One Horned White Whale]
    A-Ranked Ninjutsu
    Hyouton • Itsukaku Hakuegei is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, a gigantic horned white whale made of ice will rise from the surrounding snow to come thundering down on an opponent, crushing them and the surrounding area under its large mass. A substantial amount of snow needs to be on the ground for this jutsu to take effect, even if the user is familiar with the ~Yuki Soushi [Snow Creation] Jutsu.

    ~Gyouko Haryuu [Freezing Destruction Dragon]
    A-Rank Ninjutsu
    An advanced form of elemental manipulation, this jutsu can be used after a Water Dragon Projectile if the target is engulfed into the vortex that makes up the body of the water dragon. While the target is inside the dragon, the user would freeze it, which would consequently freeze the target as well, killing him/her.

    ~Souryuu Boufuusetsu [Twin Dragon Blizzard]
    A-Rank Ninjutsu
    Prerequisite: Kokuryuu Boufuusetsu - Black Dragon Blizzard
    Hyouton • Souryuu Boufuusetsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Ice Element. After forming the needed handseals, the Aisu will thrust his arms to send out twin ice dragons to strike his opponent. As they fly through the air they will begin to turn, creating a large dark tornado.


    Taijutsu.


    Sennen Goroshi - One Thousand Years of Death
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: E
    Type: Attack
    Range: Close (0-5m)
    Description: Though it is called “Leaf’s Ancient Supreme Technique”, Sennen Goroshi serves more as an insulting shock technique rather than a skilled Taijutsu technique. The ninja forms their hands into the seal of the tiger, and then jabs their fingers into the nether regions of their target. The result is shocking violation of the targets sanctity and often their launching in the air to stop the awkward feeling.
    Limit: None.


    D Rank Taijutsu
    Dainamikku Akushon - Dynamic Action
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Launching themselves at the opponents, the user will barrage the opponent with a random series of strikes and kicks.
    Limit: None

    Dainamikku Entorii - Dynamic Entry
    Type: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: The shinobi will throw a kunai or other object to distract the target’s attention. They will then use their speed and agility to quickly approach and attack the opponent from their blind side.
    Limit: None

    Raiken - Thunder Fist
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Gaining their peak momentum, the user will then launch his or herself at the opponent before delivering a powerful strike to the opponent.
    Limit: None

    Shoufuu - Rising Wind
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Quite simple really. This technique is basically just a swift upward kick at the opponent or to a weapon that they may be holding.
    Limit: None

    Tokken – Shoulder Thrust
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack
    Range: Close (0-5m)
    Description: A powerful charging strike with the shoulder.
    Limit: None

    Shou Shitsu – Rising Knee
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Type: Attack + Supplement
    Range: Close (0-5m)
    Description: A hard rising knee strike, capable of dizzying the opponent for another follow up attack.
    Limit: None

    Reppuu - Violent Wind
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack + Effect
    Description: Using quickness and agility the shinobi moves low to the ground and employs a spinning kick to sweep the opponent off their feet.
    Limit: None

    Senpuu - Whirlwind
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: D
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Charging at their target, the shinobi spins their body to do a flying roundhouse kick on those opponents within their range of attack.
    Limit: None

    C Rank Taijuts

    Dai Senpuu - Great Whirlwind
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: A variation of the original Senpuu, the ninja will instead utilize a series of powerful kicks, rather than just one.
    Limit: None

    Kage Buyou - Shadow Dance
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Supplementary Modifier
    Description: Kage Buyou is a Taijutsu technique that is used to position a ninja’s opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. The ninja will first quickly appear below their opponent, and then with a switch upper kick, they will launch their target into the air.
    *Note: Though this is a an attack of sorts, it will be treated like a set up action rather than a damage dealer as the dodge of this attack could mean potential combo dodge of another follow up.
    Limit: Once per battle.

    Shou Geki Shou – Rising Palm Attack
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack + Supplementary
    Range: Close (0-5m)
    Description: A hard palm attack that can send an opponent flying up into the air for a juggle.
    Limit: None

    Suupaa Ekuserento Haipaa Atakku - Super Excellent Hyper Attack
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: C
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Charging at an immensely high rate of speed, the user charges head first at the opponent in an effort to strike them in a Kamikaze-like fashion. Generally, the user will have some sort of head protection, but some Taijutsu practitioners are just super excellent and good without it.
    Limit: None


    Gouwan - Strong Arm
    Art: Taijutsu
    Rank: A
    Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
    Type: Attack
    Description: Building up an incredibly high amount of chakra into one’s fist or foot, the user will then release it all in a single instant to cause mass amounts of damage to the target or the surrounding area.
    Limit: None.

    +the academy techniques.
    Story►
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    His father (Shikakou) was killed in the Kyubi attack while trying to evacuate the people from his restaurant to safety. His mother (Ami) blamed the Mizu shinobi for not being there and thought that her husband was stupid for getting killed. Ajima, however, greatly admired and respected his father and decided to go to the academy rather than go into the family business. His mother never forgave him, but his older sister admired and respected him for it.
    When entering the academy, he never knew how to fit in, as he was from a Noble family and thought that he'd be excluded.He excelled in the Ninjustu training and combat was so good. he was Exeded so much in the fighting arts that he very nearly Killed a Child, but at the age of nine met Mitsouko-sempai - a chuunin who relied more on infiltration techniques than fighting arts. Ajima discovered under her tutilition that he had a talent for Ninjutsu and wishes to specialise now that he has graduated the academy. he also learned that he could deal with pretty much any social situation simply by nodding and listening, and that he could use this to infiltrate enemy bases. Mitsouko gave him Katana for his Thirteenth Birthday he felt more comfortable with extreme sneakiness to all out combat, although his Genjutsu skills did improve with time. Mitsouko also focused on improving Ajima's natural strategic brilliance, and generally helped the younger Boy find herself as a ninja.
    Mitsouko quickly became a figure of authority for Ajima, but shortly afterward Ajima's 13th birthday, was forced to flee the village, when it turned out that she was a spy. Ajima was thoroughly questioned about his friend and although he was found completely innocent after a couple of days, he became painfully aware that Mitsouko had hung him out to dry. Because of this, she became rather untrusting, with a strong sense of duty to her village, Thankfully the mizukage soon Allowed all bloodline limits to Be allowed everywhere so he soon was showing off his ice abilities!



    I have changed my mind about my rank. I am willing to accept going for a Chunin Character if it is allowed


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    Teashi

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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Teashi on Fri Jun 11, 2010 3:46 pm

    Akane and the Kage are trying to get as much Genin as they can, so if your to convince them to become a Jounin then you need to put it just a bit more effort in his background/story.

    Tsubame Fubuki - Snow Storm Swallows * The Swallows hone in on you right? It seems more like a rank C or B technique.

    Rouga Nadare no Jutsu - Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique * This also seems like a B rank jutsu, as it seem more advanced than some techniques. A move like this seems like one that should require an over-time chakra cost, to keep the wolves up and in form as well.

    That's all I noticed! I am not going to approve this yet, as I'd like a Kage to review it as well! : D


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  BlackZHawk on Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:16 pm

    Hmm... your Jounin level so why not put more jutsus in. I mean you say you like Taijutsu so put Taijutsu in.

    Get your basic ninjutsu down don't forget to put substitution or else you cannot use it. stuff like that.

    story could be longer.

    take your time in making your character.
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Kaiden on Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:22 am

    Do you mind putting the jusu into categorized spoilers? It really does make it easier on us
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Ajima Hanuko on Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:26 am

    The story will get longer as the RP is going along.
    Also its a Jounin not a Kage who need a really impressive ammount of history.

    Also the spoilers dont work. They dont open thats why i iever used them.
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Kago on Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:07 am

    Spoiler tags are somehow broken and don't open.

    And No, Jounin need alot of History aswell, being a Jounin is not easy, many ninja don't even reach Jounin, thats why in the Manga, there is more Chuunin/ Special Jounin than there is regular Jounin. if you have a short, boring history its more than likely your character will be boring, no real story behind them, we want characters that hold a story.


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Ell on Sat Jun 12, 2010 5:07 pm

    Im pretty sure smoeone already mentioned we need genin, and to be honest your character is in no way jounin status. Not even the meager amount of background you gave, only six jutsu? and two of them are from the canon show, and one of them is just making things. You might either want to add a LOT more to your character, or just try to get approved as a genin.
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Teashi on Sun Jun 13, 2010 4:33 pm

    Everything seems ok except for your story. Your story is not your full life, your story is what has happened BEFORE the rp has started. Try making it more detailed. What I did for my Kuro character since her history was bland was actually turn it into a story/rp type thing, that way it's longer no matter how you put it. Try doing that maybe?

    Either do something to make it longer, or remove a few jutsu and be a Genin ranking to Jounin later in the rp.


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Ajima Hanuko on Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:25 am

    Teashi wrote:Everything seems ok except for your story. Your story is not your full life, your story is what has happened BEFORE the rp has started. Try making it more detailed. What I did for my Kuro character since her history was bland was actually turn it into a story/rp type thing, that way it's longer no matter how you put it. Try doing that maybe?

    Either do something to make it longer, or remove a few jutsu and be a Genin ranking to Jounin later in the rp.



    I completely Changed it... Was bored during my junior cert and thought about it....XD
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Kenji on Mon Jun 14, 2010 2:13 pm

    I think dropping down to Chunin was a good idea. I will approve if any other Kuro/Kage will.


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Kaiden on Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:17 pm

    We're not currently accepting Chuunin characters
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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Kenji on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:01 am

    I was talking with Teashi and he said it would be a good idea.


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Teashi on Tue Jun 15, 2010 12:33 pm

    Kenji wrote:I was talking with Teashi and he said it would be a good idea.

    I said his character sheet was at a Chunin level right now, I never said it was a good idea : 3


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    Re: Ajima Hanuko

    Post  Chi on Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:23 pm

    The first thing I clicked on, I saw age, gender, picture, and personality. Your personality is two lines long. Unacceptable. You wanted Jonin, then decided you'd settle for Chunin. I wouldn't approve this for Genin. He strips when he talks and pukes when he sees bearded ladies don't count as personality. You have 8 words of actual personality in there. And so help me God if I see one more "lazy genius" profile, I WILL BAN THE LOT OF YOU. For the love of all that is good and sacred, come up with something original. Not all ninja are first in their class, most ninja are Genin and Chunin making their way to serve the village. If you care at all about ever getting approved, you'll put some serious thought into this. I'm talking at least a few sentences, preferably a paragraph. And don't give me the making it up as you RP excuse, I want to see your skills NOW. This also applies to your history. The Kyubi never attacked Kirigakure, by the way.

    Your jutsu look good. :3

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