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    Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

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    Hoodsie

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    Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Hoodsie on Sat Jun 12, 2010 3:43 pm

    Name► Kietaku Hyuuga
    Gender►Male
    Age► 14

    Personality► Relitivly content, although has a strange sort of lothsome striving for revenge he realises he will never get. he enjoyes toying with girls but often fails, he thinks of himself relitivly highly because of his looks

    Appearance► Click on the link below


    Village► Konohagakure

    Rank► Genin

    Chakra Affinity► Fire.

    Secondary Affinity►
    (Attained and Chosen at Chuunin)

    Inventory► Smoke bombs.. kunai and shurikan

    Weapon► Kunai.


    Fighting style► Gentle fists, he will fight often close ranged, taijutsu with the general gentle fists style, however he will normally use his ninjutsu to preform teh jutsu below, aswell as the pheonix fire jutsu from a distances, also he will use smoke bombs to get close to teh opponent.
    Kietaku can also pinpoint chakra points during intense battle, sshutting them down with intense bursts of chakra is he is in conteact with the opponent

    Jutsu►
    Byakugan- This Kekkei Genkei allows the user to see the Tenketsu and Chakra lines in the opponents body. These points and lines allow the passage of chakra. With the Byakugan the user can accurately hit these points and stop the flow of chakra. Only the Hyuga Clan has this power. Its distinguishing trademark is the veins around the eyes can be seen.

    Academy jutsu

    Substitution jutsu [D] - substitutes himself for a logg.

    Doppleganger jutsu [D] - can make multiple dopple gangers effortlessly.

    Walking on water and climbing up walls [E] - he can walk on water and climb up walls effortlessly.

    Transformation jutsu [D] - Kietaku can turn into another person relitivly well.

    - Death mirage jutsu [C] - kietaku's only form of advanced genjutsu convinces people taht their team mates/comrades are dead with a simple illusion

    - Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm [C] - a ranged gentle fists attack which sends out a burst of energy to hit teh opponent, kietaku can preform this attack relitivly well

    - Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand [B] he has almost masterd this technique. A barradge of gentle fist attacks, sixty four palms hit the opponent blocking chakra points and targeting internal organs

    - Pheonix fire flower jutsu [C] - as used by sasuke, a fireball is sent towards the opponent that will undoubtably burn them to a crisp if it hits.

    Story► Kietaku is a side branch member of the hyuuga clan, he carries the curse mark and despite this he keeps a relitivly happy deminer throughout his life, with not much spite towards the main branch.
    As a young child he was a relitivly gifted ninja in the academy, exeding many of his peers, all aside the members of the uchiha whom where in his class. After thei massacre his pedistool was raised and he became the msot talented ninja at the academy, graduating at twelve years old he became a fully fledged genin with his team.
    ALthough the most talented in his team his big headedness irritated his other team members and even his instructor. They would constintly remind him taht just because of his unique ability's, that he wasn't invincible, as proved when they participated in the chunin exams.
    A foolish mis judgment based upon his big headedness had extreme consiquences. In the forest of death test, despite having both a heaven and an earth scroll he attempted to gain another by attacking three yoiung sand ninja, whom not only out numberd him, but also out classed him, he was beaten down to the ground, but just before he was almost killed, his team made appeared next to him, and tried to save him from the sand ninja.
    His friend was killed, but in doing so it allowed Kietaku and the third team member to escape. They made it to the tower, but their friend had died at the hands of the sand ninja.
    KIetaku swore revenge, but never again came across the sand ninja. He went back into a state of depression, shaping his character and morphing his attitude to the ninja world. Instead of the happy child he once was, the episode at the chunin exams had changed him. After the insident he asked to have a new team, as he couldnt bare to face his old team members knowing he had caused his friend's death

    He remains a very powerfull opponent for any at genin level, however is not completly in touch with the potentiol of his byakugan and jutsu control.




    So what do you think? Smile :farao:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1354/kietaku16.jpg[i]


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    Teashi

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    Re: Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Teashi on Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:30 pm

    Seems fine to me, just add the proper ranks to each jutsu! I'd like another mod/admin's opinion as well, before approval. : 3


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    Hoodsie

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    Re: Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Hoodsie on Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:43 am

    Sorry i dont see what you mean by ranks for jutsu?
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    Re: Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Ayano on Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:45 am

    he mean, add e-rank, d-rank, c-rank, b, a or s rank.
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    Re: Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Kago on Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:02 am

    Add ranks and i know its very picky but.

    Could you change your Village to 'Konohagakure'

    Can you remove this line, as its not needed
    "The standerd gentle fist style, along with a relitivly advanced byakugan, although nothing special in comparrison to elder hyuuga's"

    once these edits along with Teashi's edits your good to go.


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    Re: Leaf Genin: Kietaku Hyuuga

    Post  Kago on Sun Jun 13, 2010 7:24 am

    Editted it for you, as you didnt quite understand.

    You have a B rank which is the 64-Palms techniques, ill let that slide as your a Hyuuga and most hyuuga have that at genin.

    Approved


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