Mist Genin: Ken Aisu

Name:Ken Aisu

Gender:Male

Age:12

Personality:Ken is a young but talented shinobi form the Kirigakure village.
Rarely seen angry or without a smile, Ken has a warm and friendly personality and stops any arguments that occurs between his comrades. Kan remains calm during life-or-death struggles. In addition, he is a rapid learner and fairly intelligent.

Appearance:Only a lot younger

Village:Kirigakure

Rank:Genin

Chakra Affinity:Hyouton

Secondary Affinity:Suiton/Fuuton

Weapon:Kunai,shuriken

Fighting style:assassination

Bloodline Limit:
Hyouton Ice Release
Members of the Aisu clan are able to combine the elements of Suiton and Fuuton to create Hyouton or the Ice Element. To Create this Ice Element, the user must manipulate the moisture and water around them.

Koorigan Ice Eye
Members of the Aisu clan have this Doujutsu activated at Genin, it allowes the user to see the moisture in the air, therefore predict how much ice they can produce, as to form Ice they must use the moisture in the air. The Koorigan is always active, leaving the members of the Aisu clan with their notorious icy blue iris, the Koorigan will make the user see everything in a shade of blue, the light the shade of blue the less moisture in the air, therefore the darker the more moisture, the blue tint in their vision doesn’t fully impair their vision, it would be the same as looking through blue tinted glasses.
Clan Jutsu:
~Aisu [Ice]
E-Rank Ninjutsu
Aisu is simply the creation of ice. At this stage the user would simply mold a small quantity of ice at a particular part of his body, normally on his hands, using the ice at them to safely grab a kunai or such.

~Hyouketsu [Freeze]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Hyouketsu is a technique which simply requires the user to touch a nearby water source, using his special chakra to freeze it. The chakra needed depends of the size of the water source. In some cases it could also be used to make the air colder, partially transforming the water moisture into ice, or even, while in mid air, create an ice block, which the user could use to jump higher, or change direction while in mid air.

~Yuki no Mari (Snow Ball Jutsu)
D-Ranked Ninjutsu

By collecting water in the Aisu user's hand, he is allowed to form a snow ball. By focusing chakra into the ball, whenever it is thrown at the enemy it explodes with the force of 1/2 an exploding tag.

~Itteiondo no Jutsu [Euthermia Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After a number of years of using their bloodline, the Aisu developed a method to keep their bodily temperature at the regular temperature for a human (98.2 °F ±1.3 °F) despite the temperature of the environment. This allows them to use their Hyouton jutsu without them having any detrimental effects on themselves.

~Hyoumu no Jutsu [Ice Prison]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Hyourou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the Aisu clan member. After forming the needed handseals, the user will touch the ground, causing columns of ice to rise from the ground at her foe. If caught, the ice will rise up around her target and imprison them. He/She can also use this technique as a defensive measure, raising the ice to form a shield against incoming attacks.

~Sensatsu Suishou [Death by a Thousand Flying Water Needles]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Sensatsu Suishou is a Ninjutsu technique unique to the Aisu bloodline. To create the needles, the user forms the needed hand seal and then kicks water into the air with his foot. The water then rises into the air and takes the form of a thousand needles. These needles then come raining down on his target.
Normal jutsu:
Water clone jutsu:The user creates clones out of water.

Hidden Mist Technique:The user causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it.

Story:His parents died when he was very little so he lived with his aunt and uncle.They were shinobi but they kept their powers a secret.Ken didn't know about his bloodline until one day he saw his uncle practicing it.He begged his uncle to teach him.His uncle refused to teach him because it was too dangerous.One day a new Mizukage came and declared that all of the bloodlines are welcome.Ken was finally allowed to go to the academy.It took him a year to pass the exam.Now he is currently a genin.

To me everything looks fine.

I need a second opinion though... anyone? (admin)

I see alot wrong, actually x3

The first two jutsu were created by another ice user (I forget which of the two it was though) on these forums, I'd suggest getting his/her permission first. Second, you need to name the Kekkei Genkai somewhere if ice will be your Kekkei Genkai. Your story needs to be longer, even for a Genin, and you need to put more effort AND originality into your character.

Sorry if that seems a bit tough, but it's true : 3

The ice KG were created by me and i don't mind him using them. As a matter of fact I PM'd them to him.

Your Story is off.

Aisu clan members are now somewhat famous in kirigakure their children wouldnt be in the Dumpster, and if your parents died other family/clan members would have taken you in.

Ok i edited it

Approved.